As an entrepreneur, I have counted on numerous friends and family members to be
important sources for contacts and to spread the word about my business. Over the
years, I've discovered I must literally put the exact words in their mouths to ensure
they convey an accurate message about who I am and what I do. Well I guess it just shows
that no matter how well you know the lesson, you can always screw up-because that's
exactly what happened the other day at lunch.
I recently offered to put together a meeting to introduce a writer friend to some clients
of mine-four partners in a well-established marketing and public relations firm who were
looking for a freelancer. I thought I had prepared for everything-from a restaurant close
by to everyone's office to a pre-lunch email outlining three things we were going to discuss.
The one thing I failed to plan was a bragologue about my friend. Bragologues are succinct,
story-like monologues that memorably capture and portray a person's interests or
accomplishments. So when my introduction of her tumbled out, it was less than stellar.
I tangled the details of my friend's job experience so badly that by the time I was done,
she had worked for 79 years. Also, I was uncertain about her current projects and so
incorrectly placed her at a job she left more than three months ago.
My friend graciously transitioned into telling her story without so much as a raised
eyebrow or dirty look. Fortunately, after an hour and half of great damage control by
the two of us, the partners asked her for a follow-up meeting the next week. As I was
driving home, relieved that things had ended well, I couldn't help but reflect back on
the situation. I realized my mistakes: I should have checked in with my friend prior to the meeting (and not just when we' were walking to the table). I should have written down her information and turned it into a bragologue. And I should have practiced several times out loud, paraphrasing the facts until they felt comfortable rolling off my tongue. Okay, so that's where I goofed. However, as much as I blamed myself, I had to admit my friend was also culpable. After all, it was her big chance to sell herself, so she should have given me articulate, entertaining, and up-to-the-minute bragologue material to work with. Truth be told, the couple of times I had asked her to go into more detail about her professional background, she sloughed it off saying, "Oh let's talk about something more interesting." Not a good sign!
The day after the meeting, when I called to apologize for my mishap, my friend asked for
feedback about how she had presented herself. I suggested including more about the exotic
places she's lived in, flushing out one or two of the most interesting articles she had
written, and dropping the names of a few of the prestigious publishing houses she's edited
for. And when at her next meeting with the partners, she did all of that-it worked! They
commented about her breadth of expertise and gave her the coveted first assignment.
I can't stress enough the importance of making sure that people who are slated to introduce
or talk about you-at a luncheon, an industry panel, a keynote speech, or even a cocktail
party-have the facts straight. We tend to believe we have little control over what our
friends, relatives, and colleagues say about us. Yet when others introduce you, they often
either repeat what they have heard from you or make something up. So get your bragologues
down, keep them current, and repeat them often. And make certain that everyone around you has
the most up-to-date version. Remember: A successful word-of-mouth bragging campaign is
contingent upon getting the right words in the mouth to begin with.
TIPS FOR GREAT INTRODUCTIONS
· Weave the details together in a story-like fashion to create a memorable bragologue.
· Be succinct.
· Keep the content fresh and updated,
· Be clear with others about what you want them to emphasize about you.
· E-mail your bragalogue to everyone who might need it.
· Don't get lazy about preparation-even with your spouse or best friend.
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